Aloha Bill. Much as I am in agreement with your message, much of the delivery is sharp and as such deters the reader from embracing your ideas. I would love to see the collective idea of education and measurements re-examined and revamped. To move this agenda into the full light and attention of the president of the United States is worth all our efforts. Would you feel comfortable moderating your tone, if it means keeping the essence of your message fully intact?